the feedback.
about my ESSAY people, my essay.
"nice opening."
"good."
"nice."
"yes."
check mark, check mark, check mark... [x's 20] (check mark means 'good.')
"An excellent explication of a difficult poem. Your interpretation of the images is articulate and persuasive as you unfold the complex themes of the poem. You notice the smallest details, commenting absolutely and boldly on their significance. You don't really comment on the final line; still, your essay is perceptive and admirable. A."
(also, i scored a 90 on the huge-ass poetry test.)
"nice opening."
"good."
"nice."
"yes."
check mark, check mark, check mark... [x's 20] (check mark means 'good.')
"An excellent explication of a difficult poem. Your interpretation of the images is articulate and persuasive as you unfold the complex themes of the poem. You notice the smallest details, commenting absolutely and boldly on their significance. You don't really comment on the final line; still, your essay is perceptive and admirable. A."
(also, i scored a 90 on the huge-ass poetry test.)
posted by annette at
2:35 PM
2 Comments:
you're terrific!
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Anonymous, at 3:35 PM
wow, i can hardly even understand the critique, so i'm doubly impressed! this must be your time of life. good for you!
les
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Anonymous, at 3:28 PM
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